希望你可以帮我修改一下我的 英语表达方式

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先不说句子意思了,我也没有太仔细的推敲,只是指出些明显的语法或表达问题吧：1、foryearofthedragonthatisworthrememberinginthepastyearlifeisbe

你开章就是废话2段,改改开头,你自己都知道每个人都有梦,那不是废话么?例子1的一丢丢希望改成一点点吧,或者一个.不然看起来愿望好像很多的酱紫,一丢丢就如一袋袋,知道了么?最后一只然段肿么又变成中国梦了

Word就自带,你写完后按回车,如果出现绿色或者红色细波浪线,点右键就会指出你错在哪里了.

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我帮你改了一下,这样会更好一些,你看一下...Twentyyearsago,everyonewatchedspringfestivalgalaonCCTVonNewYear'sEve.Ontheoth

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