帮忙英语作文"a surprise i had"

第一句错了,建议将来时,我将要成为你的新室友,form改fromaveryexcitingthings单数communicateyouwithmylivinghabits建议改为communicate

economic改为economicalstudentshadaheateddiscussionaboutmoney要用现在时Somestudent要复数sourceofhappiness不妥帖啊so

1.Therearetwostoresinthedowntown.oneisFunkyClothesStore,andtheotherisFamilyClothesStore.FunkyClothes

Dayandday这个可以改成Dayafterday.talkto改为talkwith会更好.整体的句型句式都还可以,但要注意部分大小写youcannotonlygreetthestudentsnex

MyDreamJobMydreamjobwillbeworkinginoneofthebiggestinternationalaccountingfirmasanaccountant.Iwanttob

Ilovetraveling.Travelingnotonlybroadensmyhorizonsbutalsoopensmyeyestotheworld.What'smore,itrefreshes

自己的事情自己做

Lingling,sorrytohearthatyourdoghaslostitsway.ButIamsureitwillbebacksomeday.Youknow,it'sverycute.再答：T

你的别字语病忒多了楼上两位连第一句的cuntries都没发现?仅以此文与你参考参考Insomecountries,teenagershavejobswhiletheyarestillstudents.

importance改为importantthough改为throughbit改为lottheChina改为Chinesesuccess改为succeedrecent改为recently不要用only

ATODAYISFOOL'SDSY,ANDONTHISDAYIWASMADEJOKESBYMYFRIENDS,AFTERMYBREAKFAST,WHENIGOTBACKTOMYCLASSROOM,ON

12thMarchDearProfessorJamWewouldliketoinviteyoutoattendthepartyheldbytheEnglishCorneronFridaynight.B

呃有的地方不知道是笔误还是什么your写成了you还有youreffortswillbepaid你没有“be”这个词,如果是笔误,那我只有一点建议,高考的作文最主要是简单,你这个有点过于追求特殊句式了

DearJack:Itwasanincrediblestorythatnoneofyouhadeverexperienced.ThestoryhappenedlastSunday.Iwastaking

AnnouncementTherewillbeafootballmatchbetweenelegantgirlsandLionteamatMoonlightSchoolfrom3:30Pmto5:30

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sally[大师]1.ItwasMom’sBirthdayOnedayMonsaidtome"Iloveyou.son"Iwasveryhappythatdayandwenttoschool.6o'c

我的春节今年我同我家人过了一个快乐的春节.大年三十晚上,我们全家人在餐馆聚在一起吃了团圆饭.用餐期间,我们说话聊天还玩游戏.我们祝福彼此.例如,祝身体健康,凡事尽力而为,新年好心情,快乐每一天等等.由

写那方面的呀～具体一点丫～－－!

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