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非常紧急,请帮我个忙吧,帮我改篇英语作文.只要是错都挑出来,我感激不尽.
It is kown to all that parents are our lives mentor.They are also our friends who are always willing to help us whenever we are in trouble.They are always by our side,supporting us,and encouraging us without expecting any returns.All they ask for is we must be happy.Anyway,they are our close people.So I think the attitudes of parents toward solving teenage problems are crucial determinants of child personality development.
There is an old saying in China ,“Not listening to the old people word ,suffer losses before the eyes ”.Parents always think we will have an easy life if we take their direction.Some parents chose friends for their children and urge them to study.But there are also some parents who neglect their children because of work.There are also some parents spoil their children too much.I have read a news about a criminal.He was a naughty boy when he was a child .One day he stolen a needle from his neighbor because of funny .His mother didn’t criticized for his action.When he got older ,he was sent to prison because of theft.There are also an example which about a “Genius”.He was a genius boy who went to university when he was very young ,but his mother had to take care of him when study .He can not even brush teeths by himself.His mother said she did all the thing for him so that he could concentrate on his study.But parents wouldn’t walk with children their whole life,helping them every step of the way.
As far as I am concerned ,a good mentor have to be a good listener,one who is receptive and willing to listen to others' opinions.I think parents should take good care of children but also let them have their own space
In conclusion,parents attitudes play a key role in child personality developm
It is kown to all that parents are our lives mentor.They are also our friends who are always willing to help us whenever we are in trouble.They are always by our side,supporting us,and encouraging us without expecting any returns.All they ask for is we must be happy.Anyway,they are our close people.So I think the attitudes of parents toward solving teenage problems are crucial determinants of child personality development.
There is an old saying in China ,“Not listening to the old people word ,suffer losses before the eyes ”.Parents always think we will have an easy life if we take their direction.Some parents chose friends for their children and urge them to study.But there are also some parents who neglect their children because of work.There are also some parents spoil their children too much.I have read a news about a criminal.He was a naughty boy when he was a child .One day he stolen a needle from his neighbor because of funny .His mother didn’t criticized for his action.When he got older ,he was sent to prison because of theft.There are also an example which about a “Genius”.He was a genius boy who went to university when he was very young ,but his mother had to take care of him when study .He can not even brush teeths by himself.His mother said she did all the thing for him so that he could concentrate on his study.But parents wouldn’t walk with children their whole life,helping them every step of the way.
As far as I am concerned ,a good mentor have to be a good listener,one who is receptive and willing to listen to others' opinions.I think parents should take good care of children but also let them have their own space
In conclusion,parents attitudes play a key role in child personality developm
第二行 改成support us,and encourage us without expecting any returns
第二段开头引用的话改成这个吧 If the old dog barks,he gives counsel.英语作文就引用英语谚语吧
十三行 an example which about a “Genius”去掉 about
倒数第八行 改为 take care of him when he studied
倒数第七行 改为 all the things
倒数第六行But parents wouldn’t walk with children their whole life,helping them every step of the way.感觉怪怪的
第二段开头引用的话改成这个吧 If the old dog barks,he gives counsel.英语作文就引用英语谚语吧
十三行 an example which about a “Genius”去掉 about
倒数第八行 改为 take care of him when he studied
倒数第七行 改为 all the things
倒数第六行But parents wouldn’t walk with children their whole life,helping them every step of the way.感觉怪怪的