英语小故事 求大神改错 !急啊 谢了
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英语小故事 求大神改错 !急啊 谢了
When I six years old,I watched acrobatics on TV. It was very exciting.So I played a beer bottle.Threw it in air,but I didn't caught.Result,my arm had a wound.So far it still in my arm.
When I six years old,I watched acrobatics on TV. It was very exciting.So I played a beer bottle.Threw it in air,but I didn't caught.Result,my arm had a wound.So far it still in my arm.
When I (was) six years old,I watched acrobatics on TV.It was very exciting.So I played (with)a beer bottle.Threw it in (the) air,but I didn't caught (it).(As a )result,my arm (got wounded).(Till now,the scar still is on my arm.)
再问: 没错了吧 ? 真心感谢
再问: 没错了吧 ? 真心感谢