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What a happy day today.

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What a happy day today.
I ate a delicious breakfast in the moring.
and watched TV in afternoon.
After watched TV.I did my homework with favoirite friend.
Then I played baasketball with my friends.
In the evening I take a walk with my father and my mother.
What a happy day today.
额,还是favourite拼错...
我直接帮你改了.
what a happy day today(用it is我认为更好).
i ate a delicious breakfast in the morning and watched tv in afternoon.(美英一般在and前面不会分段和加标点,54也可以~)
after watching tv,i did my homework with my favourite friend.
then i played basketball with my friends.
in the evening i take a walk with my father and mother.
i had a happy day!
恩,7年级的文章最好多用点形态,例如:过去将来,过去的过去,过去完成时等等等等~
还有,不要用这么多段落,
这片比以前的好,
但是最好抓住中心~