大师作文网哪位英语达人帮我看一下这篇英语文章,哪些地方错误.虚心请教
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哪位英语达人帮我看一下这篇英语文章,哪些地方错误.虚心请教
Good morning everybody
The weather getting more cold within this weekdays . So i hope that my dear friends have to take care of themself .
I have a lot of headaches includeing work and family , Even if my woke is very easy and i more interested in it ,but i would like to learn more knowledge of english and only this way i can improve my owe life values ,rather than the days is a goof ,
Woke and rest is what i think
On the other hands ,my family there are more difficulties ,Such as :relations ,Sometimes heart always feel uncomfortable .maybe i miss a person everyday and this person nobody can replace , . No I don't want to say more
Good morning everybody
The weather getting more cold within this weekdays . So i hope that my dear friends have to take care of themself .
I have a lot of headaches includeing work and family , Even if my woke is very easy and i more interested in it ,but i would like to learn more knowledge of english and only this way i can improve my owe life values ,rather than the days is a goof ,
Woke and rest is what i think
On the other hands ,my family there are more difficulties ,Such as :relations ,Sometimes heart always feel uncomfortable .maybe i miss a person everyday and this person nobody can replace , . No I don't want to say more
Good morning,everybody!
The weather is getting much colder within this weekday .So I hope (that) my dear friends must take care of themselves .
I have a lot of headaches including work and family ,Even if my work is very easy and I am interested in it ,but I would like to learn more knowledge of English and only in this way I can improve my owe life value ,or the days are goof .
Work and rest are what I think at present.
On the other hand ,my family there are more difficulties ,Such as :relations ,Sometimes my heart always feel uncomfortable .maybe I miss a person every day and this person can't replace any longer ,.No,I don't want to say more
The weather is getting much colder within this weekday .So I hope (that) my dear friends must take care of themselves .
I have a lot of headaches including work and family ,Even if my work is very easy and I am interested in it ,but I would like to learn more knowledge of English and only in this way I can improve my owe life value ,or the days are goof .
Work and rest are what I think at present.
On the other hand ,my family there are more difficulties ,Such as :relations ,Sometimes my heart always feel uncomfortable .maybe I miss a person every day and this person can't replace any longer ,.No,I don't want to say more