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作文题：my favorite gift 怎样写成满分作文。希望老师帮忙。网上有的不要。谢谢
解题思路： next
解题过程：
想写满分作文。一是主题明显。语法无误，语句通顺。
my favorite gift
i have many good gifts m my life. but this pen is my favorite one.it isn't a usual gift it has a meaningful mean for me.it is about a unforgetful story.
one night last year ,my father was ill suddenly .he was ill badly.my mother and i took him to the hospital at once .the doctor looked him carefully but he wasn't saved .when he just left our life ,he said to me in a weak voice ."i bought a blue pen for you .i thought i would give you as your birthday gift.i am afraid i won't hand it in your hand.this pen is in my drawer,when you go home ,you regard it as a anniversary(纪念) if i leave you and your mother ,you should listen to your mother and study harder .in the future you will go to college.".he died and left us when he finished these words.i have taken this pen since my father died.it often encourages me to study harder. it often reminds me to look after my mother.
it makes me be a understandable and brave boy.it can reminds me of my father .this pen is my favorite gift for me.
最终答案：略
解题过程：
想写满分作文。一是主题明显。语法无误，语句通顺。
my favorite gift
i have many good gifts m my life. but this pen is my favorite one.it isn't a usual gift it has a meaningful mean for me.it is about a unforgetful story.
one night last year ,my father was ill suddenly .he was ill badly.my mother and i took him to the hospital at once .the doctor looked him carefully but he wasn't saved .when he just left our life ,he said to me in a weak voice ."i bought a blue pen for you .i thought i would give you as your birthday gift.i am afraid i won't hand it in your hand.this pen is in my drawer,when you go home ,you regard it as a anniversary(纪念) if i leave you and your mother ,you should listen to your mother and study harder .in the future you will go to college.".he died and left us when he finished these words.i have taken this pen since my father died.it often encourages me to study harder. it often reminds me to look after my mother.
it makes me be a understandable and brave boy.it can reminds me of my father .this pen is my favorite gift for me.
最终答案：略