求英语学霸,帮忙把英文错的地方改一下.

求英语学霸,帮忙把英文错的地方改一下.
The 918 memorial located in Shenyang ,Liaoning province ,the museum is a reminder for future generations not forget that “918” national humiliation.
九·一八历史博物馆,位于辽宁省沈阳市,该馆是为警示后人勿忘“九一八”国耻而修建.
Museum was established in 1991,officially opened on September 18,1999.The new covers an area of35000 square meters and a building areaof 12600 square meters ,open area of 9180 square meters ,thedevelopment of line is 510 meters long
博物馆成立于1991年,于1999年9月18日正式对外开放.新馆占地面积35000平方米,建筑面积12600平方米,开放面积9180平方米,展线长510米.
Construction of “918" history museum with atotal investment of 130 million ,receive donations from thesocial from all walks of life and overseas Chinese and international friends,supplies up to 50 million .
建设“九·一八”历史博物馆的总投资达到了1.3亿元,收到来自社会各界及海外侨胞和国际友人的捐款、物资达5000余万元
The museum with richhistorical data to introduce the Japanese imperialism launched "918" incident,the crimes of enslave the Chinese peopleand the sufferings of the occupied areas and indomitable struggle of life.
馆内以丰富的史料向人们介绍了日本帝国主义发动“九一八”事变、奴役中国人民的罪行和沦陷区人民的苦难生活及不屈不挠的斗争事迹.
We should taking warning ,and make our motherland stronger ,only be strong we can protectourselves ,afterall ,history is thepast ,we should look the future ,trying to keep moving forward.
我们应该引以为戒,使我们的祖国更强大,只有强大才能保护自己,毕竟,历史是过去,我们应该展望未来,继续前进.

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The 918 memorial IS located in Shenyang , Liaoning province ,the museum is a reminder for future generations TO not forget THE “918” national humiliation.
九·一八历史博物馆,位于辽宁省沈阳市,该馆是为警示后人勿忘“九一八”国耻而修建.
Museum was established in 1991,officially opened on September 18,1999.The new MUSEUM covers an area of 35000 square meters and a building area of 12600 square meters , open area of 9180 square meters ,the development line is 510 meters long.
博物馆成立于1991年,于1999年9月18日正式对外开放.新馆占地面积35000平方米,建筑面积12600平方米,开放面积9180平方米,展线长510米.
Construction of “918" history museum raised a total investment of 130 million ,RECEIVED donations from DIFFERENT PARTS OF THE SOCIETY, ALSO FROM THE OVERSEAS CHINESE and international friends, SUPPLIED up to 50 million .
建设“九·一八”历史博物馆的总投资达到了1.3亿元,收到来自社会各界及海外侨胞和国际友人的捐款、物资达5000余万元
The museum with richhistorical data to introduce the Japanese imperialism launched "918" incident, the crimes OF ENSLAVING the Chinese people and the sufferings of PEOPLE FROM the occupied areas and THE STRUGGLE OF THE indomitable LIVES.
馆内以丰富的史料向人们介绍日本帝国主义发动“九一八”事变、奴役中国人民的罪行和沦陷区人民的苦难生活及不屈不挠的斗争事迹.
We should TAKE IT AS A warning , and make our motherland stronger , WE CAN ONLY BE ABLE TO PROTECT OURSELVES WHEN WE ARE STRONG , BECAUSE afterall ,history is the past , we should look FORWARD TO the future , TRY to keep moving forward.
我们应该引以为戒,使我们的祖国更强大,只有强大才能保护自己,毕竟,历史是过去,我们应该展望未来,继续前进.