最近有个用英语讲故事的比赛,我准备的是寒号鸟的故事,这有篇寒号鸟的英语短文,希望大师们帮忙看看

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最近有个用英语讲故事的比赛,我准备的是寒号鸟的故事,这有篇寒号鸟的英语短文,希望大师们帮忙看看
看看有没有错误,不妥的地方,就把不对的地方说说然后改过来
There is an article "Story of Han Hao Bird".The bird has very beautiful feathers.Summer,Han Hao bird body covered with a bright feathers look very nice.Han Hao bird incredibly proud to feel that they are the most beautiful bird under the sun,and even Phoenix can not be compared with itself.And so it all day shaking the feathers,everywhere,walked up and down,but also triumphantly sing:"Phoenix better than Phoenix better than me!" Summer passed,and autumn arrives,the birds have all opened their busy,they flew to the south and some began to go hand in hand,ready to spend a warm winter there; some to stay on the hard busy day,accumulation of food,repair Wo nest,make winter preparations.字数限制-

Summer,Han Hao bird body covered with a bright feathers look very nice.
In summer the bright feathers of Hanhao bird look very nice.
Han Hao bird incredibly proud to feel that they are the most beautiful bird under the sun...
The Han Hao bird is incredibly proud ,feeling that they are the most beautiful bird under the sun and that ..
.And so it all day shaking the feathers
And so it shakes the feathers all day here and there ,walking up and down and singing ," Phoenix is not better than I!Phoenix is not better than me!" when the autumn arrives,all the other birds are busy preparing for winters .Some fly to the south and some begin to be ready to spend
the warm winter there ,repairing their nests ,accumulating food for winter ...

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