帮忙修改英语 自我介绍

帮忙修改英语 自我介绍
Hi eveyone .My name is .so lucky I learned with you together last semester.You've already known over me.Today I'm gonna to tell you about me that you don't know.I was born in small town.My parents are all farmers.So I'm a famer's daughter.I had begun to do the farm work when I was a little girl.About eight years old.I konw most of you were born in good families.And you are so yong than me.Maybe you've never experienced those.But I did.That was so hard.But also that was intresting.I planted rice seedlings,grew crops,potatos,all kinds of vegetables and kept chicken,ducks,and pigs.That made my childhood rich and colorful.The second thing that I'm gonna say is my little pets.I love cats,and I have 4 cats.If I suffer from loneliness,cats will make me comfottable.So I spend the whole weekend to be with my cats.Cats compensated for lack of my life.I hope I can have all kinds of cats in my entire life.Anyway thank you for listening.I wish we could have a great time this term.

Hi everyone.My name is .So lucky that I learnt with youtogether last semester.You've already known a lot about me.
Today I'm going to tell you about myself that you didn’tknow.
First,I was born in a small town.My parents are allfarmers.So I'm a farmer’s daughter.I had begun to do the farm works when Iwas a little girl of eight years old.I knowmost of you were born in good families.And you are so younger than me.Maybe you'venever experienced those,but I did.It was so hard,but interesting.I plantedrice seedlings,grew crops,potatoes and all kinds of vegetables,and keptchicken,ducks,and pigs.All these farm works made my childhood rich andcolorful.
The second thing that I'm going to say is about my littlepets.I love cats,and I have 4 cats.If I suffer from loneliness,cats willmake me comfortable.So I spend the whole weekend to be with my cats.Cats compensated for lack of my life.I hope I canhave all kinds of cats in my entire life.
Anyway thank you for listening.I wish we could have a greattime this term.
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注：Cats compensated for lack of my life.这句话没看懂想说啥,所以没改.
再问： 我想说的是 猫填补了我生活的不足 请帮我翻译一下这句话吧 谢谢
再答： 修正： The second thing that I'm going to say is about my littlepets. I love cats, and I have 4 cats already. If I suffer from loneliness, cats will make me comfortable. So I spend the whole weekend to be with my cats. Cats help me a lot to get rid of the loneliness. I hope that I can have all kinds of cats in my entire life. //增加already。 //按照意思，改成 Cats help me a lot to get rid of the loneliness. 猫帮助我摆脱孤独感。 //增加that （I hope that）。 补充一句： learnt 是 learn的过去式。 learned意思是博学的。 不过现在很多人也用learned表示learn的过去式，但是专业的用法还是要区分的。
再问： 我一直搞不懂 加that 和不加that 区别大吗？ 还有这句 猫填补了我生活的不足 不可以帮我翻译一下吗？
再答： 增加that区别不大，只是会觉得句子更顺。同理，那个already也是。Cats enriched my life. 但是感觉有点儿怪，错是没错，但很少见这种说法。
再问： 好吧 那我就删去那句 很谢谢你。 你是在国外留学回来的吗？ 英语为什么那么好
再答： 多谢夸奖。没留过学，一般工作用英语比较多，而且也经常出国，所以有一些经验。 希望能帮到你，不客气。
再问： 我在上大学， 所以在学英语。以前没好好学，现在想补过。 以后要帮忙的还有很多，弱弱的问一句，可以加您为好友吗？
再答： 可以啊。 没关系，有问题尽管问，能帮上忙一定帮。英语什么时候学都不会晚。 更正一下： Today I'm going to tell you something about myself that you didn’t know. 增加了something: I'm going to tell you something.
再问： 嗯 谢谢！ 但我不知道百度知道怎么加好友 ㅠㅠ
再答： 其实我也不知道 - - 私信你了。