大师作文网保护环境比赛
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帮我修改，我不会写英语作文，15可以拿多少分
解题思路： 优点：你词汇量还算不错，虽然句子不通顺，但能有这么多字数,内容也完整。今后，只要坚持多写多练多模仿，一定有提高的。
解题过程：
15分大概是7分。扣分情况：卷面潦草，句子语法错误多，不通顺。
由于你没有提供原材料，可以在你的基础上这样修改：
In order to let the students know how to protect the environment, a competition about how to use the waste materials was held.900 students took part in the competition with 1000 art works were handed in.The art works were shown on the Internet by Student Union,and 200 students won the first and second prize. One of the winners, named Li Ming, successfully made an art work with the theme of Protect Environment is Everyone's Duty out of some newspaper and magazines.
All in all,the competition has shown the students' enthusiasm and improved their environment awareness.
解题过程：
15分大概是7分。扣分情况：卷面潦草，句子语法错误多，不通顺。
由于你没有提供原材料，可以在你的基础上这样修改：
In order to let the students know how to protect the environment, a competition about how to use the waste materials was held.900 students took part in the competition with 1000 art works were handed in.The art works were shown on the Internet by Student Union,and 200 students won the first and second prize. One of the winners, named Li Ming, successfully made an art work with the theme of Protect Environment is Everyone's Duty out of some newspaper and magazines.
All in all,the competition has shown the students' enthusiasm and improved their environment awareness.