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请帮我修改我写的英文简短介绍信 非常紧急!
以下 是 我选修的课 实习必须写给家长的一封介绍信
请帮我修改 英语语法 和排列下句子
必要的话 如果觉得不通顺 请帮我修改和增加一点内容
dear parents:
it's my pleasure to meet you all
first,i have to introduce myself
my name is .
i'm from .college student
i'm taking the early childhood education course now
and for this course,i have to do my stages (internship) in the daycare
in order to learn more about how to be a professional educator,and to get a new experience as well
i will be watching and doint my observation with your children in this semester
from setember 3 to noverber 26
i'm looking forward to meet you all in this semester.
thank you for understanding
have a good weekend
by:请帮我修改和增加补充多一点内容
请帮我修改我写的英文简短介绍信 非常紧急!
修改后如下:
Dear parents,
It's my pleasure to meet you both.(all用于三者或三者以上的全部,父母是两个人,用both)
First,I have to introduce myself,my name is .
I'm a college student of .University/College.
I'm taking the early childhood education course now and for this course,I need(用have to会显得你很不情愿做这件事) to work as intern in the daycare.(这里写做为实习生在日托工作)
In order to learn more about how to be a professional educator,and to get a new experience as well,i will look after your children and do my observation in this semester from 3rd Sepember to 26th November.(这里很明显要用将来时,不能用将来进行时,watch表示照顾没有look after好,直接写做观察就好了,不要写of your children,没有家长喜欢自己的小孩是别人的研究对象的,可以不用写得那么直白.)
I'm looking forward to meeting you all in this semester.(look forward to 后面加动词ing形式,不用用原形)
Thank you for your understanding.(这里要说清是your understanding,英文里最重要的一点就是时刻involve你的说话对象)
Have a good weekend!
建议:1,注意单词拼写和字母大小写.
2,注意断句和标点.