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Do you want to know more about DaZhou?I'll introduce it to you.If you want to have fun,maybe Lian Hua Lake is a good place.You can enjoy yourself in the boat and go sightseeing.If you want to go somewhere quiet,do not miss FengHuang mountain.The air is fresh.It's good for your health.And climbing mountain helps you stay healthy,too.If you are really boring,you can playing mahjong in the teahouse with friends.
There are also delicious food in this city.People often go to San Sheng Palace or eat in Hao Chi Street.Besides these,you can taste some snacks like pancake,barbecue,even bean curd with odor(臭豆腐).While you eating them ,you can hang out at the center square.
Dazhou has developed a lot ,especially the environment.I love my hometown,I wish you to have a good time in DaZhou!
Do you want to know more about DaZhou?I'll introduce it to you.If you want to have fun,maybe Lian Hua Lake is a good place.You can enjoy yourself in the boat and go sightseeing.If you want to go somewhere quiet,do not miss FengHuang mountain.The air is fresh.It's good for your health.And climbing mountain helps you stay healthy,too.If you are really boring,you can playing mahjong in the teahouse with friends.
There are also delicious food in this city.People often go to San Sheng Palace or eat in Hao Chi Street.Besides these,you can taste some snacks like pancake,barbecue,even bean curd with odor(臭豆腐).While you eating them ,you can hang out at the center square.
Dazhou has developed a lot ,especially the environment.I love my hometown,I wish you to have a good time in DaZhou!
Do you want to know something about DaZhou-my hometown?If your answer is "Yes",ok,I'll introduce it to you..If you want to be relaxed or have a good time with your friends ,Lian Hua Lake is a good place for you .You can enjoy yourself in the boat and go sightseeing in it.If you want to go somewhere quiet,do not miss FengHuang mountain.The air is fresh and it will make you comfortable.It's good for your health.Climbing mountain also helps you stay healthy.If you really do not know what to do ,you can playing mahjong in the teahouse with your friends.It will be exciting.
The food in this city is also delicious .People often go to San Sheng Palace .Some people eat in Hao Chi Street,too.Besides these,you can taste some snacks like pancake,barbecue,even bean curd with odor(臭豆腐).While you eating them ,you can hang out at the center square.
Dazhou has developed a lot over the years,especially the environment.I love my hometown,I wish you can have a good time in DaZhou!
改完了,没语法错误吧?如果你是初中生我想我改得还行（我初三）,如果你是高中生～
不管怎样,你自己再改改吧、
The food in this city is also delicious .People often go to San Sheng Palace .Some people eat in Hao Chi Street,too.Besides these,you can taste some snacks like pancake,barbecue,even bean curd with odor(臭豆腐).While you eating them ,you can hang out at the center square.
Dazhou has developed a lot over the years,especially the environment.I love my hometown,I wish you can have a good time in DaZhou!
改完了,没语法错误吧?如果你是初中生我想我改得还行（我初三）,如果你是高中生～
不管怎样,你自己再改改吧、