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帮我看一下有什么语法错误或者语句不通顺的
My changed
How I've changed?Do you want know?OK!Let me tell you!When I was a child,I used to be afraid of the dark,for me,the dark is very terrible .But now,I am not terrified of the dark,and I'm used to terrifiedspiders,for this,I have no chang.Uh-huh.About appearance.When I was a child,I used to be short,now,I'm a talled.And I used to have long hair,now,I just have short hair...I'm so depressed!I like long hair!For learning,I used to like gym class and art class,but now,I don't like gym class,so tired!Really!In fact,I want to be a child!
My changed
How I've changed?Do you want know?OK!Let me tell you!When I was a child,I used to be afraid of the dark,for me,the dark is very terrible .But now,I am not terrified of the dark,and I'm used to terrifiedspiders,for this,I have no chang.Uh-huh.About appearance.When I was a child,I used to be short,now,I'm a talled.And I used to have long hair,now,I just have short hair...I'm so depressed!I like long hair!For learning,I used to like gym class and art class,but now,I don't like gym class,so tired!Really!In fact,I want to be a child!
1.changed--changes 要用名词
2.How I've changed?--How have I changed?语法错误
3.the dark--- darkness 这里不用定冠词the,而且用名词形式
4.for me ---- to me 对于我来说
5.同3
6.I'm used to --- I used to 不加am
7.for this --- to this
8.I have no chang--- I have no change
9.I used to be short --- I was short
10.I'm a talled--- I am tall
11.And I used to have long hair,now,I just have short hair...I'm so depressed!
And I had long hair before,by now,It is short and make me feel depressed.
12.gym class and art class--- PE and Art classes
13.I don't like gym class --- I don't like PE any more,
学英语嘛,就是要不怕错,多问多思考就好.刚写出来已经比很多人强了.加油吧.
2.How I've changed?--How have I changed?语法错误
3.the dark--- darkness 这里不用定冠词the,而且用名词形式
4.for me ---- to me 对于我来说
5.同3
6.I'm used to --- I used to 不加am
7.for this --- to this
8.I have no chang--- I have no change
9.I used to be short --- I was short
10.I'm a talled--- I am tall
11.And I used to have long hair,now,I just have short hair...I'm so depressed!
And I had long hair before,by now,It is short and make me feel depressed.
12.gym class and art class--- PE and Art classes
13.I don't like gym class --- I don't like PE any more,
学英语嘛,就是要不怕错,多问多思考就好.刚写出来已经比很多人强了.加油吧.
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