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Good morning , everyone
The topic of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.
First of all, congratulate students on being grown-ups. Being a grown-up not only means you have grown up, but also means that you need to do more.
As I was a child, I was always dreaming of growing up as soon as possible. Because as long as I grow up , I could do whatever I want to and have more freedom. But now I am a grown-up I find something don’t go on as I expected. Taking responsibility for everything is becoming more and more important. I hope that I could do more for my families and society. To make these come true, I must try my best to go to a good university.
Thank you for listening. 老师辛苦了，给出分数。
解题思路： 见下
解题过程：
First of all, congratulate students on being grown-ups. Being a grown-up not only means you have grown up, but also means that you need to do more. As I was a child, I was always dreaming of growing up as soon as possible. Because as long as I grow up , I could do whatever I want to and have more freedom. But now I am a grown-up I find something don’t go on as I expected. Taking responsibility for everything is becoming more and more important. I hope that I could do more for my families and society. To make these come true, I must try my best to go to a good university. Thank you for listening.
呵呵，这个习作好像见过？全文语言准确，行文流畅。高级句式和词汇比较到位。只有描红部分稍作一下改动：改成not going，属于find sth doing 结构。
本文给分可以到22-23分。
如对本题解答还有疑问，可在“继续讨论”中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。谢谢你的配合！匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。我是菁菁草老师，随时为你答疑解惑!
最终答案：略
解题过程：
First of all, congratulate students on being grown-ups. Being a grown-up not only means you have grown up, but also means that you need to do more. As I was a child, I was always dreaming of growing up as soon as possible. Because as long as I grow up , I could do whatever I want to and have more freedom. But now I am a grown-up I find something don’t go on as I expected. Taking responsibility for everything is becoming more and more important. I hope that I could do more for my families and society. To make these come true, I must try my best to go to a good university. Thank you for listening.
呵呵，这个习作好像见过？全文语言准确，行文流畅。高级句式和词汇比较到位。只有描红部分稍作一下改动：改成not going，属于find sth doing 结构。
本文给分可以到22-23分。
如对本题解答还有疑问，可在“继续讨论”中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。谢谢你的配合！匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。我是菁菁草老师，随时为你答疑解惑!
最终答案：略