大师作文网帮我点评一下一篇高中英语小文章
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帮我点评一下一篇高中英语小文章
On the first day of school,my homeroom teacher assigned me with a deskmate,a girl named Liu Min.
Dressed in really plain clothes,she looked just like any other girl.I didn’t think she has any special qualities in her so I didn’t notice her at all.
However,soon I found out how wrong I was.She was very hard-working; thus,she did well in every subject.She was also a warm-hearted person who couldn’t resist helping others.She gave me a lot of help on my studies and I’m really grateful for everything she had done for me.
I’m really lucky that we became excellent friends over the years and I hope we’ll always be friends.
要求点评有精彩词语 句式 结构 看点
On the first day of school,my homeroom teacher assigned me with a deskmate,a girl named Liu Min.
Dressed in really plain clothes,she looked just like any other girl.I didn’t think she has any special qualities in her so I didn’t notice her at all.
However,soon I found out how wrong I was.She was very hard-working; thus,she did well in every subject.She was also a warm-hearted person who couldn’t resist helping others.She gave me a lot of help on my studies and I’m really grateful for everything she had done for me.
I’m really lucky that we became excellent friends over the years and I hope we’ll always be friends.
要求点评有精彩词语 句式 结构 看点
英语句式错了,而且还有点多.得加强哦,大致意思还是懂了,只是语法、句式、时态方面.