大师作文网大家帮我看看这篇英语书信有没有错误（格式＼拼写）
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大家帮我看看这篇英语书信有没有错误（格式＼拼写）
Dear Mr He:
I am so sorry to repaly your letter so lately.
In your last letter ,you said that I didn't write in English.I am sorry about it .Even though I have learened English for a few years,I still can't express myself effectively in this language.I know it isn't simple to learn a foreign language well,but I will do my best to learn English well.
Now,I am in my school:the Civil Avation University of China.After a long winter holiday I am back to my school.In the first winter holiday I did not go back to xinjiang.I went to HuBei ,a province which is my parents' hometown.my father was there.You know the south of china suffered from a heavy snow disaster,but my parents' hometown was fine,there was no power failure.
After studying for a term,I got two negligible honors,one is the excellent student in the military training",the other one is "China Southern Airlines scholarship for proverty students" ,next term my studies will be more difficult than before,I will still do as best as I can.
The spring festive has been ended ,and everything starts again.best wishes for you and your famlily.
Yours respectfully
wudong
25th Feb .2008
Dear Mr He:
I am so sorry to repaly your letter so lately.
In your last letter ,you said that I didn't write in English.I am sorry about it .Even though I have learened English for a few years,I still can't express myself effectively in this language.I know it isn't simple to learn a foreign language well,but I will do my best to learn English well.
Now,I am in my school:the Civil Avation University of China.After a long winter holiday I am back to my school.In the first winter holiday I did not go back to xinjiang.I went to HuBei ,a province which is my parents' hometown.my father was there.You know the south of china suffered from a heavy snow disaster,but my parents' hometown was fine,there was no power failure.
After studying for a term,I got two negligible honors,one is the excellent student in the military training",the other one is "China Southern Airlines scholarship for proverty students" ,next term my studies will be more difficult than before,I will still do as best as I can.
The spring festive has been ended ,and everything starts again.best wishes for you and your famlily.
Yours respectfully
wudong
25th Feb .2008
因该是,I'm so sorry to reply to your letter so late. 其他的都对的.