大师作文网求英语高人,看一看我这篇短文有没有语法的错?
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求英语高人,看一看我这篇短文有没有语法的错?
I think everyone all has dream .But I don't have dream.If you ask me what do you want to be ,I will answer her sorry ,I don't kown .Meby I want to be a teacher ,a doctor ,a policeman and more.
I don't have a good idea .I have two brothers .they all want to be a doctor .My mother is a ..,my father is a ..They want me can happy every day .Now I must study English very well .I think I can do it last ,I hope everyone good good study ,day day up.That all ,thank you!
I think everyone all has dream .But I don't have dream.If you ask me what do you want to be ,I will answer her sorry ,I don't kown .Meby I want to be a teacher ,a doctor ,a policeman and more.
I don't have a good idea .I have two brothers .they all want to be a doctor .My mother is a ..,my father is a ..They want me can happy every day .Now I must study English very well .I think I can do it last ,I hope everyone good good study ,day day up.That all ,thank you!
everyone 后面的all 去掉
第二行第五个词 her 改成you 前后一致 然后加上 ,“sorry ,i do not（不要用缩写） know.然后不是Meby 是Maybe
第二大段 第一行 a doctor改成 doctors
They want me can happy every day 改成they hope i can...
Last改成 at last 或者lastly
good good study ,day day up这个真的是中式英语 开玩笑可以 写成作文就不对了
PS 你现在读小学吧?还需练习
第二行第五个词 her 改成you 前后一致 然后加上 ,“sorry ,i do not（不要用缩写） know.然后不是Meby 是Maybe
第二大段 第一行 a doctor改成 doctors
They want me can happy every day 改成they hope i can...
Last改成 at last 或者lastly
good good study ,day day up这个真的是中式英语 开玩笑可以 写成作文就不对了
PS 你现在读小学吧?还需练习