大师作文网帮我改正一下这盘初中小作文的语法错误
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帮我改正一下这盘初中小作文的语法错误
Now and then.
People's life are changed better.In the past,people also poor.because the fiance not developed.the family is big.commonly,every family has only one child now.and the traffic is faster.the education is better.almost everyone can go to school..people are getting healthier.because madicine is advanced.there are less illness.so people can live longer than they did.but there are many junk food now.but I think pollution of the enviroment is very serious.the air doesn't clean.and we only can play at home.we only can play computer,watching tv.in the past,we can play in the big and spacious playground.
but In my opinion,i think that the present has politically progressed than the past.the living has improved.
Now and then.
People's life are changed better.In the past,people also poor.because the fiance not developed.the family is big.commonly,every family has only one child now.and the traffic is faster.the education is better.almost everyone can go to school..people are getting healthier.because madicine is advanced.there are less illness.so people can live longer than they did.but there are many junk food now.but I think pollution of the enviroment is very serious.the air doesn't clean.and we only can play at home.we only can play computer,watching tv.in the past,we can play in the big and spacious playground.
but In my opinion,i think that the present has politically progressed than the past.the living has improved.
Now and then.
People's life changes better.In the past,people also poor.because the fiance is not development.the family is big.commonly,every family has only one child now.and the traffic is faster.the education is better.Almost everyone can go to school..people are getting healthier.because madicine is advanced.there are less illness.so people can live longer than they did.but there are many junk food now.but I think pollution of the enviroment is very serious.the air doesn't clean.and we only can play at home.we only can play computer,watching tv.in the past,we can play in the big and spacious playground.
In my opinion,i think that the present has politically progressed than the past.the living has improved.
People's life changes better.In the past,people also poor.because the fiance is not development.the family is big.commonly,every family has only one child now.and the traffic is faster.the education is better.Almost everyone can go to school..people are getting healthier.because madicine is advanced.there are less illness.so people can live longer than they did.but there are many junk food now.but I think pollution of the enviroment is very serious.the air doesn't clean.and we only can play at home.we only can play computer,watching tv.in the past,we can play in the big and spacious playground.
In my opinion,i think that the present has politically progressed than the past.the living has improved.