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求英语高手修改此文!On the morning,I tidy my books.There are about Chi

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求英语高手修改此文!
On the morning,I tidy my books.There are about Chinese,English,maths···I put this books in three boxes.Then,my parents and me carry three boxes yo our old house.
On the afternoon.We come back home and sleep an afternoon of time.I am tired.
求英语高手修改此文!On the morning,I tidy my books.There are about Chi
On the morning-in the morning在下午也一样,用in.最好所有时态换成一般过去时.因为都是已经发生了的.
I tidied my books-英文不这么说,太中式了,你可以说,I put my books away./I put my books in order.
.There are about Chinese,English,maths·-they are about.它们是关于...的书
Then,my parents and me carry three boxes yo our old house.-my parents and I carried these boxes to our old house.
We come back home and sleep an afternoon of time.I am tired.-We came back home and had a nap. I am tired now/I feel tired now.
一般英语sleep是说晚上睡觉的那种,要睡很长时间,所以用nap,比较好,就是打了个瞌睡.
你写东西不要用中文的思维去想,要用英语的思维.