帮忙短文改错With the National College Entrance Exam draws near,Ife

帮忙短文改错
With the National College Entrance Exam draws near,I
feel more and more nervously.I know that my parents depend
on myself to realize their dream .Over the past three years,
I have been working hard so as to live up their expectations.
I know how disappointing they will be if I should fail the
exam.I asked my teacher for some advice.He said,"That
doesn't matter whether you can be admitted to a key university,
and there will be nothing to regret for as long as you have
tried your best." His word encouraged me a lot.I will face
every single day with a smile but I believe I will be a winner.
还有一篇 麻烦大神们一起改了
I found a reference book in a bookstore near our school.
The book was just what I was badly in need for；However,
it was too cheap.the owner of the shop could only give
me the discount of10 per cent.My deskmate's suggestion
was that I bought one online.He said goods online were
usually much cheaper.Following his advice ,I surfed on
the internet.and to my great delight,the book offered
at half price online.I immediately purchased it online
ithout hesitations.Thanks to my deskmate,I saved sbout
40 yuan,with that I treated jim to a meal the other day

With the National College Entrance Exam draws （drawing）near,I
feel more and more nervously（nervous）.I know that my parents depend
on myself (me) to realize their dream .Over the past three years,
I have been working hard so as to live up (to 不辜负的意思) their expectations.
I know how disappointing they will be if I should (should去掉)fail the
exam.I asked my teacher for some advice.He said,"That（改为Tt）
doesn't matter whether you can(will) be admitted to a key university,
and there will be nothing to regret for(for去掉) as long as you have
tried your best." His word （words）encouraged me a lot.I will face
every single day with a smile but（and） I believe I will be a winner.问题补充：
I found a reference book in a （the）bookstore near our school.
The book was just what I was badly in need for（for去掉）；However,
it was too cheap（expensive）.the owner of the shop could only give
me the （a）discount of10 per cent.My deskmate's suggestion
was that I bought（buy）（本句是省略should） one online.He said goods online were
usually much cheaper.Following his advice ,I surfed on （去掉）
the internet.and to my great delight,the book offered （+was）
at half（+the） price online.I immediately purchased it online
ithout hesitations（hesitation）.Thanks to my deskmate,I saved sbout
40 yuan,with that （which）I treated jim to a meal the other day
括号里就是改好的了,