帮帮看看我的英文自我介绍.谢谢
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帮帮看看我的英文自我介绍.谢谢
看看有没有问题..
Hello everybody….how are you doing today . I'm glad to introduce myself briefly. First of all. my English name is axis . i am fifteen. years old .I'm an outgoing boy. i love English and I like speaking English . i do well in international technology. So I want to be skillful in IT . I intersted in play games ..such as electron games and sports game ..i like playing basketball very much .
I am come from nanjing forign language school ..i did a bad work in my life of this eight grade..so I want do my best in this school ..
就这两个地方么
看看有没有问题..
Hello everybody….how are you doing today . I'm glad to introduce myself briefly. First of all. my English name is axis . i am fifteen. years old .I'm an outgoing boy. i love English and I like speaking English . i do well in international technology. So I want to be skillful in IT . I intersted in play games ..such as electron games and sports game ..i like playing basketball very much .
I am come from nanjing forign language school ..i did a bad work in my life of this eight grade..so I want do my best in this school ..
就这两个地方么
几个地方
1/ So I want to be skillful in IT.这句话虽然说语法上没有错,但总觉得怪怪的.
2/ I intersted in play games ..such as electron games and sports game ..i like playing basketball very much .
这句,首先应该是be interested in然后后面应该接名词形式.而且不用such as断了吧.直接说更简洁
电子游戏用electron game也很中国英语,PC game不知道可不可以代表你的意思.
Sports后面的game可以不用了
I am interested in playing PC games and sports.
3/ I am come from nanjing forign language school.这句不用am了.I come from...
4/ i did a bad work in my life of this eight grade..完全没明白你想表达什么,"我八年级读得很不好?"
1/ So I want to be skillful in IT.这句话虽然说语法上没有错,但总觉得怪怪的.
2/ I intersted in play games ..such as electron games and sports game ..i like playing basketball very much .
这句,首先应该是be interested in然后后面应该接名词形式.而且不用such as断了吧.直接说更简洁
电子游戏用electron game也很中国英语,PC game不知道可不可以代表你的意思.
Sports后面的game可以不用了
I am interested in playing PC games and sports.
3/ I am come from nanjing forign language school.这句不用am了.I come from...
4/ i did a bad work in my life of this eight grade..完全没明白你想表达什么,"我八年级读得很不好?"
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