英语翻译本周我提交了市场学概论的OT 为论文打好基础.这篇论文提纲是老师当堂一对一进行评价的.我为此尽力做到做好.老师在

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本周我提交了市场学概论的OT 为论文打好基础.这篇论文提纲是老师当堂一对一进行评价的.我为此尽力做到做好.老师在指导时一一指出了提纲中的错误.我的提纲,老师提出虽然内容详细,但是作为提纲显的过于复杂,而且主次不清晰,论述中表述不清晰,为什么?结论?这些重点过于简略,反而论述资料过于复杂!总体来说没有大的错误,但是需要改进的地方非常多,特别是该简略的地方和该详细的地方,希望在正式的论文中有所改正!
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This week I submitted the assignment for marketing introduction OT to construct a solid base for my paper. The paper outline is evaluated by my instructor in class on a one on one basis. For this I tried to make it a best one. During the tutoring, my instructor pointed out the mistakes in the outline one by one. According to the instructor, although my outline contains lots of details in its content, it seems to be too complicated as a outline. Furthmore, it doesn't state clearly what the important parts and the less important parts are, and the argument is not explained in a clear way either. Some key points such as why, how and conclusion are too brief. However, as a contrast, too many information is included for arguing and analyzing part, which is too complex.
In general there are no big mistakes in it, thought it needs amending and improving in many places, especially in those places where some of the words should be ommited to make the part shorter or some more words should be added to make the part longer and more detailed. I hope the revisions could be made in my formal paper.
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