大师作文网一篇英语小作文.大家给看看.找找毛病.我英语很烂.马上要考试了.最好明天之前.
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一篇英语小作文.大家给看看.找找毛病.我英语很烂.马上要考试了.最好明天之前.
Good afternoon,ladies and gentlemen,my dear teachers and grduates.
It is a great honor for me to stand here and make a speech.
At first I want to in memory of my school,when I was 15year old ,I came to the middle school.There were many flowers and birds ,Every teacher were kindness,The class was so interesting that students listened attentive Besides I got along well with my schoolmates.
Then I want to say :Dear teacher ,You tought me knowledge.I never forgot it ,Dear mom,If without you supported me ,I could not stand here.Dear schoolmates Thank you for your helped
Finally I wish we have a good future and a wonderful physical.
Thank you for listening.
Good afternoon,ladies and gentlemen,my dear teachers and grduates.
It is a great honor for me to stand here and make a speech.
At first I want to in memory of my school,when I was 15year old ,I came to the middle school.There were many flowers and birds ,Every teacher were kindness,The class was so interesting that students listened attentive Besides I got along well with my schoolmates.
Then I want to say :Dear teacher ,You tought me knowledge.I never forgot it ,Dear mom,If without you supported me ,I could not stand here.Dear schoolmates Thank you for your helped
Finally I wish we have a good future and a wonderful physical.
Thank you for listening.
honor____honorable
when I was 15year old ——when I was 15-year-old
There were many flowers and birds___There were many fiowers and birds in it
Every teacher were kindness____Every teacher was kind
,The class was so interesting that students listened attentive Besides I got along well with my schoolmates._____There class was so interesting that students listened carefully. （这里你打的有问题?我给你个比较合理的回答）And I also got on well with my schoolmates.
,You tought me knowledge._____You taught me knowledge
I never forgot it ______I never forget it
,If without you supported me ,I could not stand here. ____If without your support ,I would not stand here.
Dear schoolmates Thank you for your helped———— Dear schoolmates Thank you for your help.
Finally I wish we have a good future and a wonderful physical______Finally I wish we will have good future and a wonderful physical(?这是“物理的,身体的”的意思,我没明白?）
这篇文章.不是特别好.不过考试得个中等分还差不多
再问： 靠谱~~谢谢... 关于写作文，再让分得的高一点，请问还有什么好的建议没？？
再答： 你最好多看看一些特殊句式 我给你几个： It is(强调部分）that(原句照抄）（注意，此时去掉It is that 句子仍然成立） It is(原句剩余）that（你要加的主语） （原来的内容）+that/which+你想给所修饰词语的修饰词
when I was 15year old ——when I was 15-year-old
There were many flowers and birds___There were many fiowers and birds in it
Every teacher were kindness____Every teacher was kind
,The class was so interesting that students listened attentive Besides I got along well with my schoolmates._____There class was so interesting that students listened carefully. （这里你打的有问题?我给你个比较合理的回答）And I also got on well with my schoolmates.
,You tought me knowledge._____You taught me knowledge
I never forgot it ______I never forget it
,If without you supported me ,I could not stand here. ____If without your support ,I would not stand here.
Dear schoolmates Thank you for your helped———— Dear schoolmates Thank you for your help.
Finally I wish we have a good future and a wonderful physical______Finally I wish we will have good future and a wonderful physical(?这是“物理的,身体的”的意思,我没明白?）
这篇文章.不是特别好.不过考试得个中等分还差不多
再问： 靠谱~~谢谢... 关于写作文，再让分得的高一点，请问还有什么好的建议没？？
再答： 你最好多看看一些特殊句式 我给你几个： It is(强调部分）that(原句照抄）（注意，此时去掉It is that 句子仍然成立） It is(原句剩余）that（你要加的主语） （原来的内容）+that/which+你想给所修饰词语的修饰词
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