5句英文的改错...1.Nowadays,the knowledge is a very important thing

5句英文的改错...
1.Nowadays,the knowledge is a very important thing because it can change or improve our life,so we should study or work hardworking for our special future.
2.We know Marco is a developing city,so we compare with other developing cities about their policy.We will discover a lot of developing city forgot some important nature elements.For example,some cities needed a lot of raw material such as wood,oil,metal,soil or other for their development,but they have needed to get it form a forest,oil well,mine and other.At the same time,they were destroying the environment and increasing the pollution in air,water or environment.
3.According to a TV news or video,we can know that human has already destroyed our environment for a long time.Their behaviour has caused the global warming,the rising of temperature or the abnormal climate in the life.If we are going to keep destroying the environment,we will pay out a heaviness cost.
4.Moreover,I discovered some product quality to be very poor such as a toy.Toy is children’s best friend in the period of child.If we do not improve the safety of toy quality,some children will injury by the poor quality toy.
5.Therefore,I think the Marco University should add two major courses which are the environment protection course and the quality management of toy product course.It is because these courses can increase Marco’s competitiveness in the world.Moreover,we can create a best image to make other people to know that Marco is the best green environment city.
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1.Nowadays,knowledge is a very important thing because it can change or improve our life,so we should study or work hard for our special future.
2.We know Marco is a developing city,so compared with other developing cities about their policy.,We will discover that a lot of developing cities miss some important nature elements.For example,some cities need a lot of raw material such as wood,oil,metal,soil or other for their development,but they need to get it from forest,oil well,mine and other.At the same time,they were destroying the environment and increasing the pollution in air,water or environment.
3.According to TV news or video,we know that human have been destroying our environment for a long time.Their behaviour has caused the global warming,the rising of temperature and the abnormal climate in the life.If we keep destroying the environment,we will pay out a heaviness cost.
4.Moreover,I discovered some product quality to be very poor such as toys.Toys are children’s best friends in the period as a child.If we do not improve the safety of toy quality,some children will be injured by the poor quality toy.
5.Therefore,I think the Marco University should add two major courses which are the environment protection course and the quality management of toy product course,because these courses can increase Marco’s competitiveness in the world.Moreover,we can create a best image to make other people to know that Marco is the best green environment city.