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A beautiful pen
When was six years old.I had a beautiful pen.It was my birthday present .My mother buy it for me.It was fifteen yuan.It was pink and yellow.I love it very much.One day ,the pen was broken.I was very sad .I am crying.Then my mother buy a new one for me.Last,I was very happy.I don't cry.
A beautiful pen
When was six years old.I had a beautiful pen.It was my birthday present .My mother buy it for me.It was fifteen yuan.It was pink and yellow.I love it very much.One day ,the pen was broken.I was very sad .I am crying.Then my mother buy a new one for me.Last,I was very happy.I don't cry.
When I was six years old.I had a beautiful pen.It was my birthday present .My mother buy it for me.It was fifteen yuan which was pink with yellow.I loved it very much.One day ,the pen was broken.I was very sad .I am crying.Then my mother bought a new one for me.At last,I was very happy and I didn't cry.
润色了一下,加了从句,这样语句就流畅了.
润色了一下,加了从句,这样语句就流畅了.