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写了一篇英语基础写作!
Dear David:
I'm so happy that you will come to visit my school and stay at my home during the time.You are warmly wellcome and let me tell you something about the activities.There is a wellcome-ceremony in the morning and then you can visit our shool.In the afternoon,we will visit some great places in our city and at night,there will be a party at which we can sing and dance.I can't wait to meet you and i hope that we will have a good time!
Yours sincerely,
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有什么错误的或者语句不通顺或者什么之类的,并且说明原因。o(∩_∩)o...
写了一篇英语基础写作!
Dear David:
I'm so happy that you will come to visit my school and stay at my home [for some time].[去掉了,很不地道,welcome不用被动]let me tell you something about the activities.There is a [wellcome ceremony] in the morning and then you can visit our shool.In the afternoon,we will visit some great places in our city and [in the evening],there will be a party at which we can sing and dance.I can't wait to meet you and [ ] hope that we will have a good time!
Yours [,]sincerely,