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改错.十处错.Tom was very happy last weekend.On the Saturday,he we

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改错.十处错.
Tom was very happy last weekend.On the Saturday,he went hiking with his parents.In a morning,they went to a forest park by car.There is a river in a park.His father and he went fishing in river.In the afternoon,they read a funny books together.Then they played chess.And Tom won!They go home at 4:30.On Sunday morning,Tom helped his mother do housework.In the afternoon,he and his mother went to cinema and watched movies.In the evening,Tom watched the TV at home.And he went to sleep at 9:00.Wow,it was a great day!
改错.十处错.Tom was very happy last weekend.On the Saturday,he we
1、On the Saturday改为 On Saturday
2、In a morning改为In the morning
3、There is 改为 There was
4、go home 改为 went home
5、watched theTV改为watch TV
6、went fishing in river 改为went fishing in the river
7、went hiking with his parents.改为went hiking with his parents.
8、in a park 改为in the park
9、a funny books 改为a funny book
10、watched movies 和went to cinema意思重复,应删去一个
再问: 第七点是什么?
再答: 貌似是句号的问题