大师作文网求解答此句的语病（括号部分）~
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求解答此句的语病（括号部分）~
After we were waiting in line for three hours,( much to our disgust,the tickets had been) sold out when we reached the window.
After we were waiting in line for three hours,( much to our disgust,the tickets had been) sold out when we reached the window.
这个句子的完整形式是
It was much to our disgust to find out,when we got to the window and after we were waiting in line for three hour,that the tickets had been sold out.
因为句子太长,并有太多 that ,说者把它缩短,但他做的不好,
正确的缩短方式是
After we had been waiting for three hours to get to the window,we found out,much to out disgust,that the tickets were sold out.
我是加拿大人,我英语老师.
再问： 那这样说，就是有两处有问题，但是答案说是括号中的是有问题的，该怎么改？
再答： 我的详细分析和更改应该可以满足考题的条件， 但如果只可以更改括号内的词组，这样改吧： After we were waiting in line for three hours, we found out much to our disgust that the tickets had been sold out when we reached the window. 但这个更改（虽然语法正确）不是最佳的表达。
It was much to our disgust to find out,when we got to the window and after we were waiting in line for three hour,that the tickets had been sold out.
因为句子太长,并有太多 that ,说者把它缩短,但他做的不好,
正确的缩短方式是
After we had been waiting for three hours to get to the window,we found out,much to out disgust,that the tickets were sold out.
我是加拿大人,我英语老师.
再问： 那这样说，就是有两处有问题，但是答案说是括号中的是有问题的，该怎么改？
再答： 我的详细分析和更改应该可以满足考题的条件， 但如果只可以更改括号内的词组，这样改吧： After we were waiting in line for three hours, we found out much to our disgust that the tickets had been sold out when we reached the window. 但这个更改（虽然语法正确）不是最佳的表达。