大师作文网求高手给改作文（英语）
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求高手给改作文（英语）
Dear Li Ming,
How are you recently?Oh,I know you aren’t very good.It has been quite a long time.since you joined us.I noticed that you haven’t found an imtimate friend,so you are alone and maybe lonely.It isn’t easy to find your real friend,I understand,but what you must do now is changing the present situation.
Have you thought why it come to this?I think the reason is yourself.Maybe you were not easygoing,or you just couldn’t find a common topic,because you weren’t interested in what they liked.If so,please try to change yourself.Your classmates are a group of people who have set up their collective.They welcome the new,but hard to be changed.You should be used to it,and develop several habits through this course.For example,our mates like sports,and you do so,why not join them frequently?And they love novels,you could talk with them about novels you have read.Or much easier,talk more and no longer keep silent.You would sonn find they’re not bad.
You could keep me as your friend since now.And I would be there whenever you seek me help.
Yours,
就看看有没语法错误,以及有更好的句子也写上.确实明天急用,
Dear Li Ming,
How are you recently?Oh,I know you aren’t very good.It has been quite a long time.since you joined us.I noticed that you haven’t found an imtimate friend,so you are alone and maybe lonely.It isn’t easy to find your real friend,I understand,but what you must do now is changing the present situation.
Have you thought why it come to this?I think the reason is yourself.Maybe you were not easygoing,or you just couldn’t find a common topic,because you weren’t interested in what they liked.If so,please try to change yourself.Your classmates are a group of people who have set up their collective.They welcome the new,but hard to be changed.You should be used to it,and develop several habits through this course.For example,our mates like sports,and you do so,why not join them frequently?And they love novels,you could talk with them about novels you have read.Or much easier,talk more and no longer keep silent.You would sonn find they’re not bad.
You could keep me as your friend since now.And I would be there whenever you seek me help.
Yours,
就看看有没语法错误,以及有更好的句子也写上.确实明天急用,
Dear Li Ming,
How are you recently?Oh,I know you aren’t very happy.It has been quite a long time since you joined us.I noticed that you haven’t found an imtimate friend,so you are alone and maybe feel lonely.I understand that It isn’t easy for you to find a real friend,but I hope that you can chang your present situation.
Have you thought why it came to this?I'm afraid that the reason is yourself.Maybe you were not easy-going,or you just couldn’t find a common topic,because you weren’t interested in what others liked.If it is true,please try to change yourself.Your classmates are a group of people who have set up their collective.They welcome the new,but hard to be changed.You should get used to it,and develop several habits through this course.For example,our mates like sports,and you too,why not join them frequently?And they love novels,you could talk with them about novels you have read.Or much easier,talk more and no longer keep silent.You would sonn find they’re not bad.
You could keep me as your friend since now.And I would be there whenever you seek my help.
Yours,
(不知道这篇作文的语境如何,觉得作者写的有些强硬的味道~稍加修改,
How are you recently?Oh,I know you aren’t very happy.It has been quite a long time since you joined us.I noticed that you haven’t found an imtimate friend,so you are alone and maybe feel lonely.I understand that It isn’t easy for you to find a real friend,but I hope that you can chang your present situation.
Have you thought why it came to this?I'm afraid that the reason is yourself.Maybe you were not easy-going,or you just couldn’t find a common topic,because you weren’t interested in what others liked.If it is true,please try to change yourself.Your classmates are a group of people who have set up their collective.They welcome the new,but hard to be changed.You should get used to it,and develop several habits through this course.For example,our mates like sports,and you too,why not join them frequently?And they love novels,you could talk with them about novels you have read.Or much easier,talk more and no longer keep silent.You would sonn find they’re not bad.
You could keep me as your friend since now.And I would be there whenever you seek my help.
Yours,
(不知道这篇作文的语境如何,觉得作者写的有些强硬的味道~稍加修改,