大师作文网高悬分.麻烦看一下这段英文的语法有无错误,也希望帮忙组织一下成为更好更完整的句子,
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高悬分.麻烦看一下这段英文的语法有无错误,也希望帮忙组织一下成为更好更完整的句子,
I never regret that I chose you.Please don't hate me.Although I like a tomboy and ugly,and too fat,but I hope you do not hate me.You will always be special.As long as you don't hate me,I will meet.
I never regret that I chose you.Please don't hate me.Although I like a tomboy and ugly,and too fat,but I hope you do not hate me.You will always be special.As long as you don't hate me,I will meet.
（1）Although I [加 look] like a tomboy and [加 am] ugly and too fat,[去掉 but] I hope...
（2） 最后那个 meet 我没看懂,你是说 你要跟他相约吗?加上 I will meet (you) 比较好点.
总体来讲这句英文没什么太大的错误,主要是句型不丰富,读起来有点死板.
另外一点,不要太强调那个 do not hate me 说一次就够了,不用强调三次.
更完整的句子 ：
I never regret that I chose you.Although I look like a tomboy and am ugly as well as fat,I hope that you won't hate me.You will always be special,and I will meet (with you) if you like me the way I am.
这里我就把第一个 hate me 去掉了,第二个保留着,第三个转换成 if you like me the way I am.
我觉得这样读起来通顺了好多,突出了你对他/她 的感情,但同时也像他/她泄漏了你自己的弱点.
♥ 自己认真整理的,现在应该比较地道了,
（2） 最后那个 meet 我没看懂,你是说 你要跟他相约吗?加上 I will meet (you) 比较好点.
总体来讲这句英文没什么太大的错误,主要是句型不丰富,读起来有点死板.
另外一点,不要太强调那个 do not hate me 说一次就够了,不用强调三次.
更完整的句子 ：
I never regret that I chose you.Although I look like a tomboy and am ugly as well as fat,I hope that you won't hate me.You will always be special,and I will meet (with you) if you like me the way I am.
这里我就把第一个 hate me 去掉了,第二个保留着,第三个转换成 if you like me the way I am.
我觉得这样读起来通顺了好多,突出了你对他/她 的感情,但同时也像他/她泄漏了你自己的弱点.
♥ 自己认真整理的,现在应该比较地道了,