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请老师帮我修改一下As a senior 3 high school students ,there is no dou

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请老师帮我修改一下
As a senior 3 high school students ,there is no doubt that we have to speed about one-third day on doing homewoke.what tired me is that we repeat do the same thing everyday .As far as I'm concerned ,i prefer to search for some interesting things from life rather than fit the boring pattern .so I usually enjoy life by collecting stamps .
Everytime,when I gained one new stamp from friends or parents ,I always behave like a children .collecting stamp remind me of that I'm enjoying life rather than life enjoy me.
The proverb said ;what life will became depends on yourself ,searching the confidence from success ,and learned the patient from failure .there is ture life
请帮我修改一下 ,不同颜色 并告诉我该如何提高
请老师帮我修改一下As a senior 3 high school students ,there is no dou
students-->student
speed-->spend
homewoke-->homework
repeat do-->repeat doing
gained-->get(现在时)
children-->child
remind-->reminds
of去掉,后面是从句
I'm enjoying life rather than life enjoy me “生活享受我"这个说法实在是说不通,可以改成I'm enjoying life rather than repeat boring routines everyday.
said-->says
became-->become
,searching the confidence from success ,and learned the patient from failure .there is ture life
后面这些都是谚语的一部分吗?自己整理一下,不要用中式说法翻译.
再问: 那语法上的错就这些 ---
再答: 明显的就这些,rather than之类的我生疏了,你自己确定一下