一篇英语改错Dear manager Just one month ago, I bought one of your

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一篇英语改错
Dear manager
Just one month ago, I bought one of your television at XXX Store here.It was model Sony 4519.The TV does not work proper.When i try to change channels use the remote control,it takes long time to respond, i have checked this repeatedly to make sure i was pushing the right buttons . i took it to your local service store for repair.They work on it,with no lucky.i want to exchange this Tv a new one of the same model,at the same price.i hope we can solve this problem in the agreeable way. if i will have no response by then.i will start looking for help from a third party.such as a consumer rights organization and a laywer.
改10个,谢谢

1.proper→properly
2.try 改为tried
2.use 改为with
3.takes 改为took
4.long time 前加 a
5.have checked 的have 改为had
6.television改为televisions
7.第一行 model 前加 a
8.第二行does 改为did
9.第四行work 改为worked
10.lucky改为luck
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个人认为这篇文章的事态应该为过去式.所以谓语动态都该用过去式.本人只改了其中10处错误,如楼主觉得本人改的不对,可以指出来.

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