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帮忙修改下演讲稿(英语的)谢谢!
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Lades and gentlemen,
Good afternoon.I’m glad to give you speech now.The name of my speech is “Treasure our life”
On May 12,2008,at the time of 12:28.There is a strong earthquake happended in wenchuang of sichuang province.Since then,.anyone there’s life has changed.The earthquake take away their houses,their families,even,their lives.But they have no time to sad.they must do all they can to continue their lives at once.
When they are in the darkness for over one hundred hours,they did’t lose the brage of going on live.They believe the world,believe someone will save them.Even if lose their legs,they still smiled to others,” be brave!please” Father have heard the son’s cry,but he choose to save other kids first.At last,when he walk to his son,his son have close his eyes forever.The Armyman go on his kness,“let me save another life,please.”When you heard these,don’t you moved by them,don’t you cry for them,don’t you want to do all you can to help them?
Of course,we do.And from them,we understand what is the real life,what is the brave life,what is the most beautife life.We also realise how to treasure our lives.Now.Please tell me,Do you have house to live; do you have book to read;do you have food to eat; do you have legs to run;do you have ears to hear,do you have eyes to see.If all the anserws is yes.Don’t doubt,you have have all the world.Your are a happy person.Think about the persons in daster area,Do you have any reason to destroy your beartiful life?No,you don’t.You must treasure it,for yourrself,for your parents,for all over the world.
That’s all.
Thank you!
帮忙修改下演讲稿(英语的)谢谢!
There is a strong earthquake happended in wenchuang of sichuang province.Since then,.anyone there’s life has changed改成 An awful earthquake in Sichuan province changed all the people's life there会比较简洁.
The earthquake take away their houses,their families,even,their lives应该用过去式took away 同时,我觉得their houses were destroyed and many lifes were killde because of the earthquake 会更好的.