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I love him
I loved him long long ago,but he just didn't know.I want to make him know that I love him,but I can't,I can't say it to him.What can I do?what can I do?I stand in his neighborhood,see him,look at him,watch him.
When he glad,I feel happy.
When he cries,I feel so sad.
But I can't help him,I hope him can very well,well.
I wanted to leave him for more time,later I know,he is my love,I decide to stay here,his neighborhood,see him,look at him,watch him.He still doesn't know.I can do nothing,I need others' help.But...Who can help me?
I loved him long long ago,I can waiting for him in his neighborhood.One day he will know that I love him.But he can't find me,because I was left...
I love him
I loved him long long ago,but he just didn't know.I want to make him know that I love him,but I can't,I can't say it to him.What can I do?what can I do?I stand in his neighborhood,see him,look at him,watch him.
When he glad,I feel happy.
When he cries,I feel so sad.
But I can't help him,I hope him can very well,well.
I wanted to leave him for more time,later I know,he is my love,I decide to stay here,his neighborhood,see him,look at him,watch him.He still doesn't know.I can do nothing,I need others' help.But...Who can help me?
I loved him long long ago,I can waiting for him in his neighborhood.One day he will know that I love him.But he can't find me,because I was left...
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I love him.
I fell in love with him long long ago,but he just didn't know.I want to let him know that I love him,but I can't,I can't say it to him.What can I do?what can I do?I often stand in his neighborhood,see him,look at him and watch him.
When he is glad,I feel happy.
When he cries,I feel so sad.
But I can't help him,I hope he is well,very well.
I wanted to leave him for a while,but later I got to know he is my love,my true love.So I have decided to stay here in his neighborhoodto see him,look at him and watch him.He still doesn't know.I can do nothing,I need others' help.But...Who can help me?
I fell in love with him long long ago.I can wait for him in his neighborhood.One day hopefully he will know that I love him.But he can't find me because I am nowhere to be found.
I love him.
I fell in love with him long long ago,but he just didn't know.I want to let him know that I love him,but I can't,I can't say it to him.What can I do?what can I do?I often stand in his neighborhood,see him,look at him and watch him.
When he is glad,I feel happy.
When he cries,I feel so sad.
But I can't help him,I hope he is well,very well.
I wanted to leave him for a while,but later I got to know he is my love,my true love.So I have decided to stay here in his neighborhoodto see him,look at him and watch him.He still doesn't know.I can do nothing,I need others' help.But...Who can help me?
I fell in love with him long long ago.I can wait for him in his neighborhood.One day hopefully he will know that I love him.But he can't find me because I am nowhere to be found.