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help me to find out the mistakes in this artice

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help me to find out the mistakes in this artice
the most important 10 years in my life had broken by games.
but,i do not regret for it now..
why..
the reason is:every human being has his/her own experiences ,it is does not matter that
i am a bad boy in your eyes..
meeting you is the best gift which the unimpossible god gave to me.
every time when i miss you ,i only hope that you can treat yourself well.
and you should feel more happier than me.
in fact,if you believe love exists in the world and between you and i.
i will sleep with the smile on my face every evening..
when you notic the artic ,i think you should konw how to do ..
---maybe i expressed my mind with some gramme mistake..
it is limited by my low levels..thanks for your translate..
help me to find out the mistakes in this artice
1 were broken
2 去掉for
3 对的
4 experience
5 对的
6 which改成that
7 对
8 去掉more
9 i改成me
10 去掉the
11 do 加个it
12 maybe i express my mind with some grammer mistakes
13 it is because my low level..thanks for your translation..!