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有几句英语,来看看啊1.I found that there are some problems need to be

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有几句英语,来看看啊
1.I found that there are some problems need to be solved.
2.As you know ,good dervice will help to attract more new readers .
3.And it is also good to your business.
4.It is harmful to the reader`s eyes.
5.It will have an effect on reader`s reading.
帮帮忙看看哪有错误,指出来啊,
有几句英语,来看看啊1.I found that there are some problems need to be
1 用了found 后面就要用were,后边要么用which need to be solved要么去了need
2.dervice是不是该service?我感觉你用will help to是想表达“有助于”?help 后要加宾语的,或help sb to do ,个人认为用good effection 比较好
3 要用就用be good at ,原句中用good for较好
4 无明显问题,只是要考虑the 的用法,若是针对确定读者的话,用它可以
5 要么用have effection on sb要么用It will effect readers
看完五句像是在写一个注意事项,个人认为主要问题在于语法不好,语法不是主要的,但也不能把单词随意堆砌