求改错..Dear friends,I'm very glad to have the chance to speak

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求改错..
Dear friends,I'm very glad to have the chance to speak to much classmates here at present.Today I'd like to take about how middle school students should deal their pocket money properly.Which is known to all,most parents give their Children the pocket money,But it is no good spending them on whatever we liked,In my opinion ,We can spend some on books,For which we can gain a lot of knowledge and pleasure.If we have any hobbies,We can use some pocket money to develop our interests in them .on the other hand,If possibly ,We'd better putting some in the bank.It will help us develop the habits of saving.Don't you think so?I hope you will give me your opinion about it,Thank you

much classmates改为many classmates；
take about改为talk about；
deal后加with,我觉得改为spend比较好；
But it is no good.这句话改为But it is not good for them to spend the money by the way they want;
For which 改为because；
interests in them改为interests with them；
we‘d better putting改为we’d better save some to the bank；
这个是要交的吗?还是考试作文,或是演讲?说实话,写的不是很好~还需多多努力啊~

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