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帮我短文改错,很长,Recently we had a heating discussion on whether pe

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帮我短文改错,很长,
Recently we had a heating discussion on whether people in cities should keep the pets.Some students think it's a good idea to keep pets because of many old people who live alone at home can get some comforts from pets.Besides,getting along well with animals makes peopole's lives more intersting.On the other hand,the other students againstthe idea.In our opinion,if too many people keep pets,this is harmful to the environment.What was worse,pets may make too much noise and even attack people.I like animals,but I think it's a good idea for some people to keep pets.But we must make some measures to prevent them from polluting the environment.
帮我短文改错,很长,Recently we had a heating discussion on whether pe
Recently we had a (heated) discussion on whether people in cities should keep the pets.Some students think it's a good idea to keep pets (because) many old people who live (lonely) at home can get some comforts from pets.Besides,getting along well with animals makes peopole's (life) more intersting.On the other hand,the other students (are) against the idea.In (their) opinion,if too many people keep pets,this is harmful to the environment.What (is) worse,pets may make too much noise and even attack people.I like animals,(and) I think it's a good idea for some people to keep pets.But we must make some (measurements) to prevent them from polluting the environment.纯属个人意见~