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解题思路： 此文基本内容达到要求，但要高分，写作能力还要继续提高。词汇贫乏，无亮点句如定语从句，it句型等。
解题过程：
第二段： 改为：First of all,London's beautiful scenery left me deepest impression.It was delightful to taste different delicious food...不是that taste; food不需要用复数；同样后面一句可改为：The food there covers from Chinese styles to England's.,
第三段可改为：classic buidings in England are twice more than those in China.下一句There seemed to be some Chinese buildings.have去掉
解题过程：
第二段： 改为：First of all,London's beautiful scenery left me deepest impression.It was delightful to taste different delicious food...不是that taste; food不需要用复数；同样后面一句可改为：The food there covers from Chinese styles to England's.,
第三段可改为：classic buidings in England are twice more than those in China.下一句There seemed to be some Chinese buildings.have去掉