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老师，您能帮我把这篇作文修改得更好一些 today is the first day of 2009,is a new day .our breakfast is dumpling.it is very tasty.on morning,we visitd my grandma and my grandpa,my grandma is eighty fifth years old ,and my grandpa is eighty sixth years old .they are very kindly . i love them. on afternoon,we visited my aunt and my uncle .they are young. we have lun ch on grandma's home . the day we are happy very much.
解题思路： 注意句首首字母要大写；注意固定短语的正确使用；注意个别标点的使用；注意个别句子的结构。
解题过程：
today(Today) is the first day of 2009,(.It)is a new day .o(O)ur breakfast is dumpling.it(It) is very tasty.on morning,(In the morning,)we visitd (we visited)my grandma and my grandpa,(.)my grandma is eighty fifth years old ,and my grandpa is eighty sixth years old .(My grandma is eighty fifty years old and my grandpa is eighty sixty years old .)t(T)hey are very kindly(kind) . i (I)love them. on afternoon,(In the afternoon,)we visited my aunt and my uncle .t(T)hey are young. we(We) have lun ch on(at) grandma's home . the day we are happy very much. ( The day we are very happy .)
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解题过程：
today(Today) is the first day of 2009,(.It)is a new day .o(O)ur breakfast is dumpling.it(It) is very tasty.on morning,(In the morning,)we visitd (we visited)my grandma and my grandpa,(.)my grandma is eighty fifth years old ,and my grandpa is eighty sixth years old .(My grandma is eighty fifty years old and my grandpa is eighty sixty years old .)t(T)hey are very kindly(kind) . i (I)love them. on afternoon,(In the afternoon,)we visited my aunt and my uncle .t(T)hey are young. we(We) have lun ch on(at) grandma's home . the day we are happy very much. ( The day we are very happy .)
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最终答案：略