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Jining is a good place for person to take a vacation. For example ,you could clmbing the Liang Shan .if the sudents want to have a educate vacation ,they could going to QuFu to see KongZi or goin to TaibaiLou .
Jining is not only a educate place ,bua also is a fasinating place. So ,if you like going shopping ,you could go to Yin Zuo .There is a lot of beautiful clothes ,and so cheap .
When you want to watch the new movie , you could go to the local cinema. I think you can find what is you like.
So ,I want to say the jiningde a good place for people.
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解题过程：
Jining is a good place for people to take a vacation. For example ,you could climb（ the去掉） Liang Shan .If the sudents want to have an educational vacation ,they could go to QuFu to see KongZi or go to TaibaiLou .
Jining is not only an educational place ,but also is a fascinating place. So ,if you like going shopping ,you could go to Yin Zuo .There are a lot of beautiful clothes ,and they also very cheap .
When you want to watch the new movie , you could go to the local cinema. I think you can find what（ is 去掉）you like.
So ,I want to say that Jining is a good place for people.
最终答案：略
解题过程：
Jining is a good place for people to take a vacation. For example ,you could climb（ the去掉） Liang Shan .If the sudents want to have an educational vacation ,they could go to QuFu to see KongZi or go to TaibaiLou .
Jining is not only an educational place ,but also is a fascinating place. So ,if you like going shopping ,you could go to Yin Zuo .There are a lot of beautiful clothes ,and they also very cheap .
When you want to watch the new movie , you could go to the local cinema. I think you can find what（ is 去掉）you like.
So ,I want to say that Jining is a good place for people.
最终答案：略