这句话有语法错误吗Although there are many factors can contribute tofa

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这句话有语法错误吗
Although there are many factors can contribute to
fatness,instead of watching TV,eating fast food and drinking sweet beverage
are actually the main causes of obesity since these food are high in calories.
感觉这个不对 instead of watching TV

用 in addition to是不是更好呢?instead of是“相反,反而”的意思,很明显,你想表达的是“除此之外”的意思!
另外Although在这里也不符合句意!去掉就好了,但不知道是不是基于某篇文章!
再问：不是很明白怎么改。。能给我发下改好了的嘛
再答： There are many factors can contribute to fatness, Iin addition to watching TV, eating fast food and drinking sweet beverage are actually the main causes of obesity since these food are high in calories.
再问：这样改意思就变了，我的意思是watching TV不会造成肥胖啊
再答： There are many factors can contribute to fatness, except for watching TV, eating fast food and drinking sweet beverage are actually the main causes of obesity since these food are high in calories. except for 是排除在外的意思！你非要这样表达的话是可以的！但感觉不如把这句话去掉的好！因为没有什么可比性！

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