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指出这篇文章的错漏之处并改正?
问：这文章有些中文也帮忙翻译下..和指出这篇文章的错漏之处并改正
Today we saw a film is "3 idiots".This a funny film,you can learn a lot of reasons.Such as if you have a trouble you don't at all think "what should i do ".you must of other idea to help yourself.Nobody know in the future,but we must protect of myself.生命 is more importanly.Just one ,so we must 珍惜.
问：这文章有些中文也帮忙翻译下..和指出这篇文章的错漏之处并改正
Today we saw a film is "3 idiots".This a funny film,you can learn a lot of reasons.Such as if you have a trouble you don't at all think "what should i do ".you must of other idea to help yourself.Nobody know in the future,but we must protect of myself.生命 is more importanly.Just one ,so we must 珍惜.
Today we saw a film is "3 idiots".is多余
This a funny film,you can learn a lot of reasons:a lot of reasons做learn的宾语不行,a lot就够了
Such as if you have a trouble you don't at all think "what should i do ".
such as后面是直接跟列子而不能跟句子的,改为for example+逗号格开,再跟后面的句子.后面改为you don't need to think"what should i do" at all.
you must of other idea to help yourself
有问题,没有谓语动词.改为you must think of other ideas to help yourself.
Nobody know in the future.
没有人知道未来的正确表达是nobody knows the future.或者是nobody knows what the future will be like.
but we must protect of myself
改为but we must protect ourselves.
生命 is more importanly
改为 life is more important
Just one ,so we must 珍惜.
能猜出你想表达什么,改为
we live only once,so we must cherish our lives.
总结:你对词性好象没什么意识.背单词要注意单词的词性哦.以及什么词性能做的语法成分也要搞清楚.那样才能提高
This a funny film,you can learn a lot of reasons:a lot of reasons做learn的宾语不行,a lot就够了
Such as if you have a trouble you don't at all think "what should i do ".
such as后面是直接跟列子而不能跟句子的,改为for example+逗号格开,再跟后面的句子.后面改为you don't need to think"what should i do" at all.
you must of other idea to help yourself
有问题,没有谓语动词.改为you must think of other ideas to help yourself.
Nobody know in the future.
没有人知道未来的正确表达是nobody knows the future.或者是nobody knows what the future will be like.
but we must protect of myself
改为but we must protect ourselves.
生命 is more importanly
改为 life is more important
Just one ,so we must 珍惜.
能猜出你想表达什么,改为
we live only once,so we must cherish our lives.
总结:你对词性好象没什么意识.背单词要注意单词的词性哦.以及什么词性能做的语法成分也要搞清楚.那样才能提高