大师作文网总觉得自己的英文写作水平,口语水平很很很一般,用的单词句子都很像小学生
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总觉得自己的英文写作水平,口语水平很很很一般,用的单词句子都很像小学生
这是一篇我明天要讲的文章,主要讲一些观点,麻烦大家帮我改改,内容主要讲你是否赞成整容手术
Today.we mainly discuss the topic is"whether agree or not to make the cosmetic surgery".
In fact that we have different opinion.We must divide different situation.AS a normal person of apperance,i think that we don't need cosmetic surgery,because the nature is
the most beatiuful.
However,i watched the news in the internet recently,which described a young girl suffered form the burn by a boy.The girl's body have a large area burns by a fire.However,even if the girl have cure,him apperance will not rehabilitate.Therefore,i think the gilr should make the cosmetic surgery.In this case,in order to a life in the future.
So i think if you don't have the special situation,we will not need this surgery.
这是一篇我明天要讲的文章,主要讲一些观点,麻烦大家帮我改改,内容主要讲你是否赞成整容手术
Today.we mainly discuss the topic is"whether agree or not to make the cosmetic surgery".
In fact that we have different opinion.We must divide different situation.AS a normal person of apperance,i think that we don't need cosmetic surgery,because the nature is
the most beatiuful.
However,i watched the news in the internet recently,which described a young girl suffered form the burn by a boy.The girl's body have a large area burns by a fire.However,even if the girl have cure,him apperance will not rehabilitate.Therefore,i think the gilr should make the cosmetic surgery.In this case,in order to a life in the future.
So i think if you don't have the special situation,we will not need this surgery.
写的还不错,呵呵. 可以的不需要修改.