请英语好的朋友帮助纠正一下翻译错误：“事实上，我是非常认真对待这门学科的。我认为，我们学。。。”

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请英语好的朋友帮助纠正一下翻译错误：“事实上，我是非常认真对待这门学科的。我认为，我们学。。。”
（中文是想要表达的意思，翻译不必和中文完全一样）
中文部分：
事实上，我是非常认真对待这门学科的。我认为，我们学科的价值在于对代码的实际应用。我分析我这次final开始没有发挥得很好的原因，在于我将所有的重点都放在了 practice the skills，而没有很好的去熟记theory。但我依然认为这次final exam的成绩不能真实的反映出我对这门课程的掌握。
我的翻译：
Actually, I was very seriously to face this subject. In my opinion, the value of this subject is practice the skills into project. I analyzed the reason why I did not do my paper exam very well, I think I spend more time to practice the skills and not spend enough time to learn the theory. But I think the result of my final exam cannot prove the real knowledge I have handled.

Actually, I was very serious about this subject. I think the significance of the subject lies in putting skills we learnt into practice. In retrospection, I analysed why I did not do well in this final exam, which might be that I put too much effort in "practising the skills" instead of learning the theories. However, I still believe that the outcome of this exam could not truly reflect the knowledge I learnt in this subject.
这是改过的版本。你的英文有点中式，加油吧。