大师作文网给寄宿家庭的一封信
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希望老师能够帮忙修改.,这是对于我来说很重要的信, 谢谢老师!., Dear Host Family The next time may be troublesome to you. Thank you, that you can receive me, thank you let me come to the United States alone and will not feel
lonely. I am very happy to stay at your home and become a new family member, I am very honor. I am a very cheerful girl, not very smart, but very strong, sometimes careless, but I will try to correct the deficiencies, I also hope you will forgive me for being some of the shortcomings, as a lively girl, I like the movement, the most favorite is the badminton and outdoor sports, the same time, I also like reading, if you are interested, I can tell you some interesting allusions about China, there are a number of
national customs, although this is only in Chinese culture is very a small part, but I hope to bring you the knowledge and happiness, to facilitate the exchange. hope you can give me some more about the name of the United States customs. I also want to learn some cooking to you.
I will do a lot of housework, in the new the family, I will try to bear all the useful and I have a civic duty. I hope that my lively and does not affect your work, I am quiet does not make you feel dull, my hard work to make you feel very at ease.
The exchange of life, may be an opportunity for my life, my parents and sister have also given me great support, not to live up to their hopes
at the same time, I do not make you disappointed, in the near future I will be to your at home to spend some time with you, I very much look
forward to live together we have a good time, if I come to bring you some happiness., Best wish fou you and thank you very much.
Yous Tao 再次谢谢老师!.,
lonely. I am very happy to stay at your home and become a new family member, I am very honor. I am a very cheerful girl, not very smart, but very strong, sometimes careless, but I will try to correct the deficiencies, I also hope you will forgive me for being some of the shortcomings, as a lively girl, I like the movement, the most favorite is the badminton and outdoor sports, the same time, I also like reading, if you are interested, I can tell you some interesting allusions about China, there are a number of
national customs, although this is only in Chinese culture is very a small part, but I hope to bring you the knowledge and happiness, to facilitate the exchange. hope you can give me some more about the name of the United States customs. I also want to learn some cooking to you.
I will do a lot of housework, in the new the family, I will try to bear all the useful and I have a civic duty. I hope that my lively and does not affect your work, I am quiet does not make you feel dull, my hard work to make you feel very at ease.
The exchange of life, may be an opportunity for my life, my parents and sister have also given me great support, not to live up to their hopes
at the same time, I do not make you disappointed, in the near future I will be to your at home to spend some time with you, I very much look
forward to live together we have a good time, if I come to bring you some happiness., Best wish fou you and thank you very much.
Yous Tao 再次谢谢老师!.,
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解题过程：
Dear Host Family
The next time may be troublesome to you. (该句是什么意思？）Thank you for receiving me, thank you for letting me come to the United States alone without feeling lonely. I am very happy to stay at your home and become a new family member, I feel very honored.
I am a very cheerful girl, not very smart, but very strong, sometimes careless, but I will try to correct the deficiencies, I also hope you will forgive me for some of the shortcomings, as a lively girl, I like sports, the most favorite ones are badminton and outdoor sports, at the same time, I also like reading, if you are interested, I can tell you some interesting allusions about China. There are a number of
national customs, although this is only part of Chinese culture , I hope to bring you the knowledge and happiness. In order to facilitate the exchange,I hope you can tell me something about United States' customs. I also want to learn some cooking from you.
I will do a lot of housework, in the new the family, I will try to bear all the duty. I hope that I will not affect your work, I do hope I will not make you feel dull,.
The exchange of life, may be an opportunity to me, my parents and sister have also given me great support, not to live up to their hopes
Best wish fou you and thank you very much.
最终答案：略
解题过程：
Dear Host Family
The next time may be troublesome to you. (该句是什么意思？）Thank you for receiving me, thank you for letting me come to the United States alone without feeling lonely. I am very happy to stay at your home and become a new family member, I feel very honored.
I am a very cheerful girl, not very smart, but very strong, sometimes careless, but I will try to correct the deficiencies, I also hope you will forgive me for some of the shortcomings, as a lively girl, I like sports, the most favorite ones are badminton and outdoor sports, at the same time, I also like reading, if you are interested, I can tell you some interesting allusions about China. There are a number of
national customs, although this is only part of Chinese culture , I hope to bring you the knowledge and happiness. In order to facilitate the exchange,I hope you can tell me something about United States' customs. I also want to learn some cooking from you.
I will do a lot of housework, in the new the family, I will try to bear all the duty. I hope that I will not affect your work, I do hope I will not make you feel dull,.
The exchange of life, may be an opportunity to me, my parents and sister have also given me great support, not to live up to their hopes
Best wish fou you and thank you very much.
最终答案：略