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my best friend My best friend is Mary. She is twelve years old. She is tall and thin. She has short black hair， two big eyes and a small mouth. She is very cute. I like playing with her we are in the same class,.She always has a smile on her face. Every morning, we go to school together. She studies quite well and she's one of the top students in our class,when I have difficulty in English, I always ask her for help. We are both interesting in music At weekends we join the same hobby group and play the violin together. We like each other and enjoy stay together. look this is my best friend .
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解题过程：
My best friend
My best friend is Mary. She is twelve years old. She is tall and thin. She has short black hair， two big eyes and a small mouth. She is very cute. I like playing with her .We are in the same class.There is always a smile on her face. Every morning, we go to school together. She studies quite well and she's one of the top students in our class.When I have difficulty in English, I always ask her for help. We are both interested in music . At weekends we join the same hobby group and play the violin together. We like each other and enjoy staying together.
Look ,this is my best friend .
内容完整，语句连贯，语法基本正确。但是要注意断句和正确的书写形式。
最终答案：略
解题过程：
My best friend
My best friend is Mary. She is twelve years old. She is tall and thin. She has short black hair， two big eyes and a small mouth. She is very cute. I like playing with her .We are in the same class.There is always a smile on her face. Every morning, we go to school together. She studies quite well and she's one of the top students in our class.When I have difficulty in English, I always ask her for help. We are both interested in music . At weekends we join the same hobby group and play the violin together. We like each other and enjoy staying together.
Look ,this is my best friend .
内容完整，语句连贯，语法基本正确。但是要注意断句和正确的书写形式。
最终答案：略