有没有错误…The temperature is very low recently,around 8 degrees.

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有没有错误…
The temperature is very low recently,around 8 degrees.I feel the winter is coming,I am afraid of coldness and winter,I wish I can have a winter sleep like a squirrel,to see the Hundreds of flowers in full bloom in spring when I wake up ...

有错误,主要是断句问题.楼主要注意一下ta的断句.是两句话就不能写成一句话.如果想把两句话写成一句话就要用连词将两句话连起来.还有就是,最后两句话要用虚拟语气哦~
括号内的是我改动的.
The temperature is very low recently,(and it is )around 8 degrees.
最近气温比较低,在8度左右.
I feel the winter is coming(.)
我感觉到冬天来了.
I am afraid of winter (because it means coldness).
我怕冬天,因为它意味着寒冷.
I wish I (was a kind of hibernating animal,and I could spend all my time on sleeping in the winter) like a squirrel.
我希望自己是一种冬眠动物,这样一来,我可以和松鼠一样,整个冬天都用来睡觉.
(I would) see the (view of) hundreds of flowers in full bloom in spring when I (was) wake up ...
春天,当我醒来的时候就会看到百花齐放的景色.

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