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英语达人们帮忙看下这文章有什么错误没
his person is Albert • Einstein. This by principal was thought in the past “does anything will not have the achievement” the stupid student, will pass through the difficult endeavor, has become the modern physics founder, has become the most outstanding physicist.
On March 14, 1879, a small life was born in Germany's small town. The parents gave a very hopeful name for him: Albert • Einstein. Looks that he that lovable appearance, the parents had reposed complete hoping for to him. However, in a while, the parents started to be disappointed: Others' children started study to speak, already three year-old Einstein talent “creaking sound” study language. Afterward, Einstein's younger sister, was smaller than two year-old him already to be able to talk with the neighbor, Einstein speaks actually hem and haw, talked incoherently. The people all thought Einstein contraction Learning disability.
Einstein’s parents very worried about him. Until Einstein 10 years old, his parents send to him to school. But in the school Einstein was mock by teacher and schoolmate, everybody said that he is “the stupid fellow”. Some teachers even point at his nose to scold: “this clever thing is really stupid, any curriculum also cannot follow!” In a craft class, teacher take an unseemly wooden stool and said “I thought that in the world will perhaps not have compared to this worse stool!” In yacketing , Einstein blushes stands said: “I thought that this kind of stool some!” Was saying, he puts out two stools unseemly from the school desk, said: “this is I first two times does, gives you are third time does, although is not good, is actually much stronger than these two!” In ridicules and in the insult, Einstein has grown up slowly, he enter into Munich's Luyt Pohl Germany Middle school. In the middle school, he liked on the mathematics and physics courses. He uses completely the energy in the outside reading and the laboratory. He always asks some strange questions. Professors all don’t like he, they think Einstein isn’t to engage in honest work.
In 1905, Einstein finished his first researches Special Theory of Relativity. It can be said that this is in physics history one time decisive and great manifesto. When people asked him the successful secret, he has written down a formula: A=x+y+z, and explains: “A expresses successfully, x expression is diligent, y expresses the correct method, then z, then expressed that little spoke the empty talk by all means must.”

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